It's quiet. Very quiet
I breathe in the silence
No one speaks
There's no one here
Just my thoughts
And me, bored
In my fishbowl existence
I speak up - Let's talk
They all join in
Turn up the volume please
Everyone has to be heard
My solitary fishbowl
Now my populated ocean
And my cacophonic claustrophobia
Rewind.
Stop.
Play.
Fail.
Cry.
It Feels Good To Write A Song and other feelings
5 months ago
54 comments:
This is very different from what I have read from your blog...nice!
ooh. you are good. boredom makes for a super cool post.
Yes Nikki... different... output from a tired mind
@ AGG
Very bored.. very tired :-)
@blog gore aka atmm aka very tired: cheer up. try aroma thai foot massage. : ) highly recommended.
Poem and all! Seems like your tiredness made you feel alive there for a second ;)
This looked alienish in your blog. Well, I pray that you be out of your boredom soon! :)
Cheers mate!
nicely done even though you were bored :)
Sorry to be a killjoy man but u probably meant quiet not quite in the first line. That apart... Yeah that seemed quite different from your usual stuff..
@ AGG
What an idea sirjee...
Now I have to get to Phuket... soon...
@ Atrisa
Alive... and smiling now :-)
@ Pawan
Trying to spread my wings... sometime it works... other times...
@ Ani
Thanks bro...
@ Divya
Thank You... it stands corrected now... happens when one depends completely on microsoft and does not proof read...
Really do appreciate you pointing out the gaffe.
And yes... I write different when I feel different...
@ Choco...
Hello... Feels like all is well when I see you back on my blog and when you like the rubbish I write... :-)
You are so wierd, delightfully weird but still weird...how do you think that kind of stuff up? You never cease to amaze me.
Once again - not good, Great!
@ Choco...
You missed nothing... I was missing... and now that I am back... it feels nice to have my old friends back...
Dont overanalyse :-)
@ Grayquill
LOl... Thank You... I was born weird... and this is one of the best compliments I have received... no jokes... thank you again... :-D
heyy...vry different frm ur earlier posts but as usual the more u write the more gud stuff we get to read frm u..
nice one..
take care... :)
Thank You Dream...
gud mrng Mr.Mind (going with the assumption that u have been sleeping all this while) ;)
Hey..! I simply loved the 'fishbowl existence' part..! Subtle, simple, yet expressive li'l poem.!
what was that????, but anything, i mean anything you write is awesome man and the same is the case with this post, cause you write so differently, that's your forte, thx for visiting the blog and following it :),
take care and keep writing.........
u shocked me ! a poem ! that was d last thing i expected from your blog..quite alien..hmm.y dont u keep writing..
:)
@ Blunt
Good morning bro... Yup awake now
@ Anita
Inspired by Floyd mate...
@ Choco
Whoa... is that something I said... I was kidding Choco... sorry...
@ Thousif
Tried something different... was bored with myself
@ Extremity...
Will keep trying mate... doesnt come naturally to me the way it comes to you...
Good and clean blog template... happy blogging
@ Anwin
Thank you mate
@ Choco
Sorry. That was a stupid attempt at self promotion... and not my style... it was a mistake... so I took it off...
ha. you are too funny. but i voted
: )
Thanks AGG
WOW!...i am still perplexed...somehow this inspires me to pen something...
@ Choco...
I still have the post... will find a way to get it through to you
@ Rashmi
Let me know as soon as you put it up...
:) touché!!
Loved the new template :)
Cheers,
Ruchi
@ Choco
Torture... I have sent it through the email thingie on your blog... dunno if it has come through... dont get to know if the message is sent
@ Ruchi
Thank You
@ Choco
Cool... let me know when you do...
I enjoy reading abstract poems.. and this one joins the list..!!
It reminds me one of a poem i wrote in office out of boredom.. Ha..sometimes boredom brings out the best in ppl.. :-D
Nice writing here.You might think of it this way. Awareness is pure consciousness. It is the fishbowl into which the goldfish of thought is dropped into at birth. Thought seems,unfortunately, have some determinism built in.We must be taught to fear and hate, but we all will kill and make war collectively and individually when we feel threatened These thoughts in our head come from a place unknown and we do not have to follow them except to do good to another.The thoughts that embarrass and amaze us can only be assumed to be a connection to that vast sea of the unconscious mind. You have a very interesting blog
Wonders how she missed reading something as awesome as this
Anyhoo, better late than never.
V V deep I must say. So unlike you Mindey. You somehow come across as a happy go lucky kinda guy(uncle??) but posts like these..make me wonder!
@ Shanu
Multiple personality disorder... do you think???
Yeah..and to think i tght only geminis suffered frm it!
No... all of me are my best friends... :-)
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