My dense brain
Can’t write poetry
Can’t write prose
Stuck for words
Gasping for breath
On one stark blog
If only I could write
Thoughts in flight
Would adorn the starkness
With vibrant luminance
Of potent prose
And fine verse
But then I can’t
And so I scribe
Amateur tripe
Mushy trash
All empty and shallow
Purely Fictional
2 days ago
16 comments:
back with the right one :) welcome...
kudos... lovelee poetry :), who called u a bad writer?? eh,
@ Moonlite
Back. But dont know what to do with self :)
@ Choco
The mind will try
To meander back more often
But be warned
More amateur tripe
Coming soon...
:D
Mindey! Long time no see
you seem to be lost in a reverie
what you call tripe
others can't write
and you call yourself a retiree
:P
@ Atrisa
Retired I am not
Dormant and in thought
How now do I write
Content that ain't contrite
But then the tripe
Regretfully that I typed
Brings you back to this site
Now it all seems right
YEEESH... yucky ain't it... but fun :D
Good to see ya back here mate... Cheers...
And you call this amateur tripe? Don't be so hard on yourself! :P
Nicely written.. My wishes!
Even a bad song is way better than a dirge - i think. Good one!
I would take a bad song over no post any day (not in any way implying that the lines were bad) :)
Its great to be back at your place Mr.Mind. Hope you're doing good :)
you have been away forever too havent you. come back! i miss my old gang :(
And I see that there has been no progress since February!! I love the poem by the way. Can relate to it.. Sigh.
writers block :/
Good. When you have writer's block. It's better to write about it!
ok..............
not bad
giftwithlove.com
Good one...
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