Thursday, March 10, 2011

A Bad Writers Song

My dense brain
Can’t write poetry
Can’t write prose
Stuck for words
Gasping for breath
On one stark blog

If only I could write
Thoughts in flight
Would adorn the starkness
With vibrant luminance
Of potent prose
And fine verse

But then I can’t
And so I scribe
Amateur tripe
Mushy trash
All empty and shallow

37 comments:

moonlite:D said...

back with the right one :) welcome...

kudos... lovelee poetry :), who called u a bad writer?? eh,

Choco said...
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As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Moonlite

Back. But dont know what to do with self :)

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Choco

The mind will try
To meander back more often
But be warned
More amateur tripe
Coming soon...

:D

Atrisa said...

Mindey! Long time no see
you seem to be lost in a reverie
what you call tripe
others can't write
and you call yourself a retiree

:P

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Atrisa

Retired I am not
Dormant and in thought
How now do I write
Content that ain't contrite

But then the tripe
Regretfully that I typed
Brings you back to this site
Now it all seems right

YEEESH... yucky ain't it... but fun :D

Good to see ya back here mate... Cheers...

Nikita Banerjee said...

And you call this amateur tripe? Don't be so hard on yourself! :P

Pranavam Ravikumar a.k.a. Kochuravi said...

Nicely written.. My wishes!

Grayquill said...

Even a bad song is way better than a dirge - i think. Good one!

blunt edges said...

I would take a bad song over no post any day (not in any way implying that the lines were bad) :)

Its great to be back at your place Mr.Mind. Hope you're doing good :)

Meghana Naidu said...

you have been away forever too havent you. come back! i miss my old gang :(

Zeba said...

And I see that there has been no progress since February!! I love the poem by the way. Can relate to it.. Sigh.

Just another girl... said...

writers block :/

Abhyudaya Shrivastava said...

Good. When you have writer's block. It's better to write about it!

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Really Bad, don't try again.

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