Friday, September 25, 2009

You know that I love you, don’t you???

“You know that I love you, don’t you”

“Yes baby”

“Then don’t ever leave me.” He sounded upset.

“Why do you say such things baby. And that too over a long distance phone call. It hurts”

“I don’t know what comes over me. Sorry. I guess I am a bit frustrated. Life is not really great, you know”

“Don’t worry babu. I loooove you”

“I don’t have much money you know. Or I would have come down to meet you. Things are really tough. I lost my job because of the fucking recession. I think the bastards needed an excuse to kick people out and recession was their excuse”

“Doesn’t matter. We will meet soon honey. Till then we have the phone baby. And If you don’t have money – I will call you”

“You are chooo sweet honey” he cooed.

“I love you baby.”

He saw her in his mind. She was radiant. Her jet black her and her cute nose. He wanted to bite the nose.

“Heh Heh… You know what I want to do now”

“No. What?” She was all innocence, wasn't she?

“Guess” he teased.

“Shut Up. That is all you can think of” she said in mock annoyance.

“You don’t like it? Ok. Wont talk about it” he teased again.

“No baby. Of course I do”

“Then why are you taking bhav”

“Shut Up”

“He He… listen to me na… You know what I feel like doing”

“No babu. Tell me”

“I want to kiss you”

“And”

“I want to feel your tongue on mine”

“And”

“I want to move down slowly, smelling your skin, kissing your neck”

Giggle. “Shut up. I am feeling ticklish”

“I want to run my tongue over your lips, find your chin and work my way down to your breasts”

“And then”

“Move up slowly again and find your mouth. I want to smell your breath. I want to feel the wetness of your mouth. I want my body to be warmed by your flesh. I want to tickle your breasts. I want to feel them grow in my hands.”

“You are so good baby" she cooed. "I can feel your hands baby and your breath. I love you baby. Come here na. What are you doing there. Come her Now. Pleeease”

“Shhh. Listen. Can you feel my tongue moving back down your neck. Can you feel my tongue moving towards your breasts. I can feel the taste of salt on your skin baby. I can smell your breast. I can hear your heart throb”

“Baby" she moaned "I can feel your body against mine. I can feel its warmth. I feel your strength. Your large manhood and your rigid hardness. Your hard harsh hands crushing my delicate body. I want you baby. I want you now. Move your hands lower down na baby. Feel me there. Find me. I want you there”

“Baby. My hands are reaching down. I feel your belly button baby. How I love it. Its depth. Its….

CLICK.............................................................................

"Hello... Hello... Baby... are you there baby.... Helooooo"

“Fuck” she thought “the line dropped.”

She wiped her brow. The air conditioner wasn't working for three days now.

She smiled to herself. And then stifled her laughter.

The fifty year old lady in the next cubicle was doing her version of the orgasm. It sounded suspiciously like an alien being tortured in Area 51. “Now which was that film”

“Poor woman. She’s giving it her all” she thought "But she wont last long. Its her first day live on calls and the big boss would be monitoring all her conversations. Alien shrieks don't work for the boss. But I wonder what her story is. Everyone here has a story. If only someone listened carefully, they would find a story screaming out loud through each fake orgasm"

That reminded her. She had to collect her paycheck from Burger King for the part time stint she did there during the last month. But she was doing two fucking shifts back to back this week. Sex sells. Even during a downturn.

"I wonder when I'll find time" she grumbled. "A million corny B-movie dialogues to be spouted sixteen hours a day - I can feel your large manhood and your rigid hardness. What the fuck is rigid hardness" she laughed to herself. "Hard harsh hands crushing my delicate body" she laughed again.

The middle aged alien looked at her in disgust.

Her phone was ringing again.

“Fuck! Seven calls on queue” she muttered to herself “Seven horny toads salivating, one of whom will help pay for my child’s education”

“Wait… I am coming baby”


“Seven calls on queue bitches. Everyone on the phone. NOW”


PS: This post is inspired by a tweet that grabbed my attention a few days back on Mentalie's blog

94 comments:

pawan said...

I expected a twist midway, but never thought that she was a prostitute (if u allow me to call her that!).

This is truly an above eighteen material, but ATMM, you have a real twisted thinking, which keeps you in high steep, above the other!

Loved this one!

As the Mind Meanders said...

Naah, She just worked for a sex hotline, which in my mind, kept her away from the grime in the streets.

Glad you liked it Pawan... twisted thinking is goood :D

pawan said...

True, twisted thinking is very good!
Btw, are you a scriptwriter or anything? Its just a doubt u knw!

And moreover, I read the post on Mentalie's blog too, it was shocking!

Gosh, the sick world of our times!

Paritosh said...

Damn good!! I liked the way you potrayed it, no sense of false modesty and guilt ridden sulking. Life is as we take it to be. Lovely.

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Pawan

No re... not that talented :-(

It is a sick world... we made it this way

Roy said...

brilliant twist in the tail...

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Paritosh

Thank You. One of my readers, a long time ago, asked me not to take sides when I write. I try to do that to whatever extent possible.

I am glad that you liked it bro.

Cheers

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Roy

Yes brother... the devils tail wags in my head sometimes :D

Meghana Naidu said...

ahh meandering mind, how you twist!
i like a lot ;)
ROFL! @ area 51 alien
rigid hardness really!

a pity it is but sex always sells

PS: run a spell check i think you got 'carried away' while writing it

*i art so bad*

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Meghana

Thank You for pointing that out. I got one.. but will take a more detailed look later. Didnt really have the time to read before posting.

Naah...you art bad... you are _____

Meghana Naidu said...

i are?

*smiles innocently*

As the Mind Meanders said...

Yes you art...

Atrisa said...

God you two, stop flirting! Tsk tsk.

Kya yaar don't say things like "rigid hardness" and "Hard harsh hands crushing my delicate body". It's been a while :|

No but seriously, I wanted to comment as soon as I read a few lines, I was wondering what was wrong with you! I'm glad I read till the end :) I never really thought about it before.

P.S: You get english sex chats with Indians? Just curious (for no reason, really. Gulp *look nonchalant*)

Meghana Naidu said...

i so wasn't!
girl you're gonna get me in trouble
and you should know better
tsk tsk yourself

and yes he shouldnt be saying things like that
and yes there are

err..
*cough*cough*whistle*

Atrisa said...

Megs, can you give me the number, it's for my friend, I swear *wiping the sweat off my forehead and trying to get over "harsh hands" and "rigid hardness"*

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Arslan said...

I love writing stories with twists. So I could get what this would turn out to be in the first few lines. Nicely done, though! I had the same idea for a story that never got written.

I think the need for human intimacy is overwhelming. Loneliness can be extremely depressing. Maybe it isn't just about sex, though in your story, it seems to be.

Atrisa said...

@ Arslan - If you have the time go through the play "Let's Have Sex" http://www.mindmined.com/public_library/plays/valentin_krasnogorov_lets_have_sex.html

It talks about you just said. We performed this play at IIM-A this year and won second prize :)

Nikki said...

Shoot! I never expected this twist! Very well put!

Ashley said...

"Everyone here has a story. If only someone listened carefully, they would find a story screaming out loud through each fake orgasm"

And this one was well told...A little too explicit for me but nevertheless well told.

You have a lovely blog :)

Meghana Naidu said...

@tris
girl
i have two words for you
granny panties
go figure
;)

and second prize
ooobaby
nice :)
link's broken btw
let me save you the trouble

http://www.mindmined.com/public_library/plays/valentin_krasnogorov_lets_have_sex.html



@meandering mind
ha ha!
what? why?
nothing
just felt like laughing at you
HA HA!

Shanu said...

Could you please post a 18+ sign next time u write sumthin like this.

I am gonna be so dead if mom finds out im readin stuff like this on blogger!!

INTELLECTUAL-HANDICAP said...

NICE!!!! :)

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oRange* said...

wow wow wow wow wow!
..and did i say WOW! :D

u'r damn good at this!
keep going :)

Shanu said...

@Chocs

Yeah u are rite..humari iss nanhi si umar main humare minds kafi impressionable hote hain. Uff! If only the meandering ones wld understnd!

P.S: Kidhar hai tu..didnt see u online yesterday!

Thousif Raza said...

awesome awesome awesome, and when i gave you the most innovative thinker award you said "i dont deserve it" haan, whats this blog gore bhai hmm... loved it really really good


take care and keep writing........

Thousif Raza said...

:P nice one man real nice


take care and keep writing.......


and happy dusshera :)

buttercup said...

Hm...I was gonna say that it reminded me of the post on mentalie's.

the sick world just keeps on being sicker everyday...

Choco said...
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Extremity said...

reading first few lines i thought this blog is slowng turning .u knw..and i thought if its for the readership..
though it has a story,the sex content is so explicit.err..so disturbingly explicit..

Anita :) said...

Content is adult material... but can we call this adult material in these doom days? This is not even 1% of what actually happens in the world..and there is nothing to be ashamed about.. or be embarassed after reading halfway through.! ATMM, brilliant portrayal!

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Atrisa

Me flirt… where??? When???

Dunno about granny panties… but if its been a while girl… its gotta be Goa… it always is Goa… have fun… Palolem…. Bagpackers… remember???

As the Mind Meanders said...

@Arslan

Naah! There was no sex mate…there was corny talk :)
Yup… I see your point… and I agree… but this story wasn’t about the caller… it was about the hotline worker… from her point of view.

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Meg
Thank you for laughing at me. I kind of like it... dunno why...

:D :D

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Meg-again

And whats with the granny panties??? Secret code???

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Shanu

Apologies… my fault… I should have… hope you weren’t offended…

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Choco
Apologies… my fault… I should have… hope you weren’t offended…

I promise to put up a warning going forward

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ IH

Thank You

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Orange

Thank you for visiting my blog… glad you liked the post… and I have been to your blog…

..and did i say WOW! :D

As the Mind Meanders said...

@Thousif

Thank You bro… still a long way to go… earth is a nice place :D

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Buttercup

I agree

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Ashley

I love the way you colour my blog now :D

Keep visiting and keep writing...

Cheers

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Extremity

What do I say… how is the blog turning… I have never stuck to any specific theme on the blog.. ever… I have and will continue to write what I believe, in my opinion, is creatively permissible… I cannot and will not try to please everyone all the time… I apologise if the post offended your sensibilities… and I apologise for not putting up a warning… I promise to next time…

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Anita

Thank you so much Anita… you are right… the world is more complex than we experience… and acknowledge…

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Shanu & Choco

Tch Tch...

Tum dono nanhi si jaanein… bilkul mere kempamma ki tharah :D

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Nikki

Heh Heh :D

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Meg & Atrisa

Thank you both for the broken link... the real deal is here...

http://www.mindmined.com/public_library/plays/valentin_krasnogorov_lets_have_sex.html

As the Mind Meanders said...

And Meg-again-and finally-again...

(I don't mind (again) going on with this again and again)

DUH-Mind finally got it when he tried to find the link to the play

lol

Ok... someone's mined it... its not mine any more

BOO HOO
:-(

Shanu said...

Of course we are like Kempamma..how wld u like it if kempamma watches mating habits of cockroaches on Discovery without ur permission??

As the Mind Meanders said...

Mera permission Kempamma ke saat hamesha rahega....

Shanu said...

Jab kempamma apna muah safed karke aayegi na tab tereko teri permission ka side effects dikhega.

In case ur wonderin why muah safed..aare mandus..cockroach hai na..uska muah naturally kala hota hai

Sheesh tereko kuch nahi aata!

As the Mind Meanders said...

Uska mooh safed hoga to uske dher saare bachche honge...

unke bachche honge

aur meri santaan duniya pe raaj karegi OH MAHA MANDUS

Shanu said...

Tere naate naati illegitimate honge..unko duniya taane maregi..and ek din pest control karke maar daalegi!

gkam said...

Nice. Twisted, but Nice! :)

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Gkam

Thank you...

Shanu said...

@ Mr Meandering Mind

Thank you for not replying to my comment. Makes me feel every nice and special.

Thanks in advance for not replying to this comment either.

Yours Sincerely
Shanu

Choco said...
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Shanu said...

@ Miss Choceshwari Devi

I humbly request you not to interfere in our family matters.

Thanking you
Shanu

Choco said...
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Shanu said...

@ Dearest Nanad Choceshwari Devi

Ek haath main aarti hai toh doosre haath main kya hai?

Totally confused and wondering
Shanu

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As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Priye

Kabhi legitmate cockroaches dekhe hain aapne???

Aur itna gussa... abhi yeh haal hai to aage kya hoga...

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ DD (Difficult Didi)

Kabhi koi apnon se gussa hota hai kya??? Aur kis baat be gussa jee???

Samjha nahin... maaf karna

Aapka budhdhu bhai

Shanu said...

@ Patiparmeshwar jee

Humne aapko letters bheje aur apne bheja hume tar(telegram)?
Bas aur nahi saha jaata..

Divorce divorce divorce

Apki Ruthi hui
Shanu

Tongue Trip said...

Cuddle wuddle kissy wissy suddenly going chandelier shaking, headboard banging, windowpane clattering and ultimately a hundred gas balloons floating in and around. Do you ever stop? I more than love it.

blunt edges said...

ahhh...phone sex...i know a friend who has it on speed dial! ;)

mentalie said...

i got suspicious when she began talking about his manhood :)

am delighted that you checked out paul toledo's photo docu, AMM. here's another fantastic one by him - about his father: http://www.dayswithmyfather.com

Nikki said...

blog updated!

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Tongue Trip

And I love your comment more than I like the post. Thank You. Feels nice. Really nice.

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Blunt

Must be a rich man. Isn't it expensive??

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Mentalie

Thank you for the link. Touching. Who is this guy... should google search him...

Thank you again...

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Nikki

Excellent... Will read it now...

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Shanu

Maaf karo please... please tumhare anadi balma ko chod na jaana priye :-(

Arslan said...

@Atrisa: Thanks for that link. It's interesting. But I felt that the scene in the play is a bit artificial in the way that all these issues seem to be coming out in the open for the very first time between the couple. Either this should've been a recurring issue, in which case, the treatment would be different, or if it was the first time, it wouldn't be so open and explicit.

Still, an interesting read and thanks for linking it. And congrats for the 2nd prize! :)

Diwakar Sinha said...

it was a bit on the 'too much' side for me..didnt expect such a post here..
at the same time, it was very involving..made me read till the end.

gkam said...

following you...

Pesto Sauce said...

Thats what it has all become...a call service impersonating love

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Diwakar

Thank you for visiting mate... read some of the other stuff if you get the time... it aint always this explicit :-)

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Gkam

Thank You... I hope can write some stuff that you can enjoy

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Pesto...

No bro.. hope still floats... not yet drowned...

ani_aset said...

God damn you gave a shock :)...well written mate, i could not make it out for the most part of the story ..nice twist

As the Mind Meanders said...

Thank Ani

Dreaming Eyes said...

hi..u r only becuming a master in watevr u write day by day..start writing scripts and novels..;)

take care..
keep writing SIR..:)

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Dream

There is a long road to travel girl...before I get there..

Thank you for the encouragement though...

Science Bloggers Association said...

Nice Blog. Congrats.
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }
[Editor- Children’s Poem & Adult’s Poem]

Sangitha said...

All the successful ingredients to make an international award winning short film.. due to the twist in the story.. ;-)
A bit explicit for me but guess it was necessary to create an impact..!!

workhard said...

Nice imagination...

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K?K! said...

hmm....this was rough
"men".... as i think of it. by the way... im writing again

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ K?K

LOL... yes... men...

God to know that you are writing mate... will come over to read soon...

Cheers

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Workhard

Thank you mate

As the Mind Meanders said...

@ Sangitha

Thank you... glad you liked it...

Anonymous said...

When you lack in the real stuff... You make it up with talk... like this... And big cars :D